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Ruptured

“And I will renew
stronger than ever
despite the snowfalls
that seek to bury me"
under blanket of pain

With ruptured joy
tenderness will grow
from distress and wounds
where life will give
warmth and peace

Then, when ruptured
renewal will strengthen
to surpass life
from pain to Warmth

Author notes

This a form that I developed called the Finclo - read more about it at:
http://allpoetry.com/list/59653-The-Finclo

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  • leo2
    February 7

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    I think most of us have been on both sides of this fence. It's sort of the "glass half empty/full" thing. You have to endure a certain amount of pain in order to appreciate the warmth and peace of being whole again. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Sandygram
    February 6

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    Lovely Form

    These words touch this readers heart and are so uplifting. A lovely poem to read this morning. Full of encouragment. Take care.

    Peace and Grace,
    Sandy


  • Melodies
    February 3

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    OH! I like this and must look at the form you have invented, good poet. Fine for thinking, most surely.


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    February 3
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    i loved pain to warmth bravo best of luck in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 3

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    Nicely penned, especially the images from pain to warmth!. Lovely.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene

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