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midnight telephone conversations




when the sirens scream outside

(the pitiful wail of men in a cruelly free world)

they remind me of a girl

who loved the police

because her daddy was in jail.


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  • quiet.mind-ed
    April 9, 2009

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    this personally hits too close to home for me to leave a detailed comment. maybe, next time.
    bravo.


  • Ishtar
    February 7, 2009

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    I think this one is too personal to have meaning for anyone else --- though, maybe making it longer and adding a few more explanatory verses would do?

    Unlike the rest of us, at least you're a consistent writer. My muse sleeps for months at a time every now and then.

    Anticipating the next bit of work, sir.

    -Reni