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The way you make me feel
Drives me insane
Cause up until now
My life has been plain

You give me feelings
I thought were a myth
No one else has importance
When it's you that I'm with

I give and I give
And you always give back
When one isn't happy
It's the other who is picking up slack

You make me so happy
And to you I the same
People ask why we're tired
and it's each other to blame

And in my arms
You fit like a glove
I guess it only makes sense
Cause it seems we're in love

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This is to my girl friend, =] shes quite amazing =]

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  • ScaryGothMother
    February 3
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    awww its lovely
    sorry you didnt win the contest
    well done any way