Dragons tongue,
Rogues eye,
Bird’s brains,
In the cauldron they fly,
Squawking, squeaking,
Retched in despair,
Plucking, wrecking,
Pulling out hair,
Bats breath,
Magic dust,
Castle curses,
Lover’s lust,
In the cauldron,
Deep they sit,
Merged with blood,
Earth and spit,
Melting, burning,
In the deep,
Snapping, breaking,
Chickens feet,
Blasting, bursting,
Burning, breaking,
Blackened animals,
Fiercely shaking,
Boiled up,
Broken, battered,
Memories of him,
I have shattered,
Author notes
I chose option 3: Wicca
I hope this isn't to retarded lol 
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ooo, really good. How you reveal at the end what is inside the cauldron, it gives you a wave of understanding that you couldnt have had if you hadnt of read the description of the memories before hand.
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Excellent
What a terrific expression. Very powerful write. Thank you for sharing.
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The hard truths of life are always bitter and makes us very sorrowful..you have spoken volumes here about the truths of life..well done..
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wow mix this is awesome! and haha sorta grose
but reaally good!
good luck for the contest
xxx
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baha. i know its retarded
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loved the flow of it. it does sound like a spell. great job.
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I sense some anger and frustration in this piece...
It flows quite nicely, as I feel a spell (or curse) should.
Would hate to have that curse cast on me heh.
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I must say.. I really enjoyed this write.. it had a wonderful flow, and the iamgery was crazy good you really did such a wonderful job.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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whoa, what an awesome write. Loved every bit of it. Well written my friend.
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Lemon Bee!
This could just bee a winner!
Yep! A lemon bee awesome write all the way around!
Def. not retarded!
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I've not tried yet to write a chant poem, this one you've written is awesome. Very well written with great flow, and I don't think it's retarded, and there I believe others will agree. Take care and good luck in the contest.
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