Kama Sutra Symphonic

... entroit

branches, stark, draw dark winter cuts

across the moon

... ala breve

she trembles within old kisses,

awaits Spring

... lark ascending, violin bow trembles in air

our kiss glides

within a slow, slow tango wisdom of hips,

infinitely patient, its knowledge

gathers

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luvdrkchocolate
February 3

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Oh. This is a pretty cool little poem that you have going on here. It is very simple and subtle with the words and images that you use. I think that's great because you leave a lot up to the imagination of the reader and how they want to see this play out. My favorite part was the violin image. That really struck a cord with me. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.
real irish rose
February 3

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I won't lie to you, I have been here for a long time and still have little or no understanding of this type of poetry... do not get me wrong, I think this write is just beautiful and it is my ignorance that I haven't looked into this style of writing before but after reading this I would like to broaden my horizons in writing.
Well written and indeed a pleasure to read.. julie x
Draig aine
February 3
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ooooh I like
a sultry way to wake and greet the day
begging4mercy
February 3
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trembling while typing.........................wow!
Goosse
February 3
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A great piece, well done
Night Hope
February 3
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Staggeringly beautiful...

You DO realize, I hope, what an absolutely incredible piece of literature this is, by the way? Solid, yet oh, so fluid imagery...such wonderful sense memories you paint within these brief lines, Dear Heart. ♥ Gorgeous. Gorgeous. Bravo!!!
Night Hope
February 3

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(Dare I, she wonders to herself?)

*ahem*

*runs to eat her sammich*
- Danny Beatty
  February 3
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  heheh
- - Night Hope
    February 3
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    *tickles ya 'cause I edited 'fore ya even got here* Slow poke.