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Master Plan

Ninjas fell from darkened stars
crawling across streets... avoiding cars

desperate to reach earth's ocean
got lost.. without a notion

 

 

 

 














 

Author notes

Prompt: The image found here:
http://www.nefsc.noaa.gov/delaware2/images/oldpics/2004/violet%20starfish.jpg

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  • Patpowers
    February 10, 2009
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    Good work on this...very original!

  • garde a l eau
    February 7, 2009
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    This is wonderfully creative.
    I so like how you see possibility!


  • new light
    February 5, 2009
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    this is so good
    i absolutely love this


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 3, 2009
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    cute
    me like

  • ashjoe76
    February 3, 2009

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    Excellent Work.

    Mystically light-hearted!
    Loved the flow of the words that create music the natural way.
    Congrats and best regards.


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    February 2, 2009
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    Lol...I love this one!!!

    Yay ninja's

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