Twilight falls,
a hush descends,
the cricket calls,
the evening ends.
A chill is felt,
the moon does rise,
the shadows melt,
the light dies.
The moonlight casts
upon your face,
the echoed past
of nature's grace.
A whispered note
among the trees
sung quite by rote
upon the breeze.
Dark shades of blue
with silver light
moonbeams of dew,
oh, what a sight.
Your heart does move
in forest dell.
Hush now, my love,
for all is well.
-D.B.
Author notes
Not much to say about this one. A standard sub-standard nature/love? ditty.
Daniel
Please tell me what you think
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I found the flow and content of this to be ever so comforting
very.... peaceful
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Thank you for the comment! You know, you're the second person to comment on my poem almost instantaneously after I posted it. I haven't been in in a few months. Is this something new? I'm Daniel, by the way. Again, thanks for the comment.
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Haha, I don't know about that, I just hit "Read, Random"
I'm Anna.
It's nice to meet you
Daniel^^
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Ah, the random poem button. I forgot about that one. When I first joined AP, they didn't have one, so I never even remember there is one.
And nice to meet you too, Anna. I've two more poems, I think, to submit, then I'll comment on something from you.
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I find it entertaining xD (oh, don't I lead a thrilling life?)
okay
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Very nice, a soothing poem for all our souls here
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