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New Year

She
She slept with my bestfriend
Out of
habit.
Something natural like
A fly that reproduces
Before it dies.
A survival skill put to use.
Captain Morgan
Yes man
Cheating whore.
Half naked on my floor.
You stand behind me
Knife in hand.
You say
Fall back I'll catch you
TRUST ME
Smiles on the house
Drink up
Before the world stops.
It did.
I'm drunk.
Say you care
You don't.
I know, Trust me.
Why
Can you hurt
ME.
My fault, let it go too
Far.
Exposed my soul.
Just to let you know.
You do.
You tore it in half.
I'm just medicated.
Booze and weed.
Can't believe
Bestfriend and my lover.
Don't give a fuck
Bout me
Fuck the world
Fuck my friend
Fuck this girl
They fucked my life
And every woman
That will be in it.

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  • psychomonkey
    February 20
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    I really liked this poem, the short choppy lines reads as anger hurt and frustration as i read them. You did a great job at conveying your feelings not only in the words that you wrote them but in the structure of the piece. you did a great job. thank you for entering.

  • Nobodysboy
    February 2

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    yea, for now maybe but not for ever, you know it, go out and just talk to other women man, see if it's happned to them too, I bet it has, heartache, it sucks but it happens a lot... least you've got the courage to write that up there ^