In Gravel sky;
Sediment where
the dawn was.
Violet star
no longer hides.
quickly!
before the moon
devours.
Tide's pull.
A contest entry
- Hrmmmm {Quickie} by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended February 3, 2009, 9 entries
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a lot of puncuation . ! ; interesting. and capitlization.
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I enjoyed it.
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This is very good, I enjoyed it
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do you mean to over-compensate your punctuation here?
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