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The Black Death's Rise

I can feel the tight grip of death

As it chokes all the life out of me

Ice cold hands that desire to feel

A warm embrace within a frozen sea

 

 

 

 

 

Oceans of blood and agony

Rivers of woe and tyranny

Only darkness surrounding me

Rising tides of endless needs

 

 

 

 

 

He who craves the poison apple

Must reach out to fall from grace

Her charms fade into the distance

Milk her dry and leave this place

 

 

 

 

 

Crush the hopes of the hopeless

Destroy the lives of the lifeless

Counter calls for help with killing

Disecting hearts as blood's spilling

 

 

 

 

 

 

The blood drains into her own mouth

Sharp bursts of pressure building demise

The time will come for a resurrection

Suffer no more 'til the Black Death's rise

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

**Special thanks to Paul Nicklen for the photograph & to my friend Kat for the custom background**

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  • this is really deep, the imagry is really strong, a very fine write
    bravo


  • Pianokidd
    February 4
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    amazing amazing job ... wow


  • Never Known
    February 3
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    I love it....

    It's a truly amazing write great job.


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 3

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    bravo

    great job on this write i love the whole thing nothing to complain about it flowed together i love it keep up the great job amazing write amazing job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    February 3

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    OH! This was AWESOME! Some of the images were were strong and I like the polarness in this. Yip!...so glad I read this.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


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