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Beyond

Beyond the tenderness of those sweet lips
which burn my lips with such wild desire,
and bring such temptation
to express the affections within my heart so much.
Lips upon lips,
like pilgrims hands within prayer
clasped tightly together
as you breath life into my heart.

Beyond the soft, silken touch of your flesh that I feel,
as my fingers trace the curves of your sultry frame
astounding your senses,
feeling your flesh shiver under my touch
as your chastened fingers moves over my body.
Attracting the same bewitching seduction to me,
setting me aflame with such carnal desire
as I do to you.
My fingers lingeringly moving over
the hills and valley of your flesh,
as the feverishness of this love take over us.
Till finally erupting within the moment
of such wondrous enchantment
as two becomes one
and we are complete within such splendor.

Beyond all that we show the world
and to ourselves,
lies something so innocent and true
that we both have discovered for a while now
and cherish so much.
Something that has sparked a blaze within our hearts,
so strong that we can not ignore.
That one thing
that binds our souls together,
bringing to us the harmony and fruition
that overcomes us like a tidal wave.
That one thing
above all other pleasures we can feel...
the true love so innocent and true.

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Something for the woman I love. For the one I call ....my Juliet.

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  • abybaby
    February 12

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    you will get what you want brother....my wishes are with you

    My fingers lingeringly moving over
    the hills and valley of your flesh,
    as the feverishness of this love take over us.

    very well said feeling


  • geckogirl silver member
    February 3
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    your Juliet will love it.... magnifient words