Why do we fall in love only to find pain they say they love us they say they need us but then they throw us away
As i stand here bleeding from the heart i start to feel my body falling apart
now i am down to my soul were dos it go from here
Why do we fall in love only to find pain they say they love us they say they need us but then they throw us away
One day i found my love and i look throw the hourglass into my forgotten past i see my soul with no were to go so i open the door for my soul to come throw i am new throw you
Why do we fall in love only to find pain they say they love us they say they need us but then they throw us away
I hope my story tells you what i have gone throw the pain is real and we will over come so keep walking forward and don't look back or your past will catch up with you
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I know how this feels. Relationships suck. The end. Oh...but this was well done, just clean up the spelling errors and you'll be golden.
-Liz
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s hmm sounds kinda like a heart break to me I have been hear many of times you think I would get use to it though sighs I never do 
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whoa...
this is amazing! i only wish i could be as good as u! -
WOW!!!
this amazing and very true. well it is to me anyways. i have gone threw this to... i feel your pain. and i hope that you can love again.
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i hope ur feeling better
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nice write but so sad cheer up
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a true accounting of and tribute to the unabriged pain of betrayal and loss, im crying as i read this.
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wow that is good
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This is pretty good, I notices a couple spelling errors though... throw you, I'm assuming you meant through you, and in the last verse "I have gone throw the pain" I think you meant "I have gone through the pain"
Also in the second stanza you have "now i am down to my soul where dos it go fro m here"
I think you meant "now i am down to my soul where does it go from here"
Great use of imagry though, it was a pleasure to read -
aww....James...
thats really sad and yes I know what youre going through...good luck
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yes, friend I feel your pain....the pain your dreaded...I would like to help on this write, in that a few words need to be spelled right to read it better......
to you...friend Rosemary 
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we all fall inlove for different reasons. its part of life.and its hard at times and we tend to get hurt but when all is said and done, you will find the one that wont hurt you.
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we fall in love for it is human nature, the thing that created us wanted something to love it back so we were given love, i think i am in love but i dont know, and true love shall heal your past pains
~~Chef W.B.
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wow its even better now that its done its great true life can make for the best things to write about even know it may hurt so bad
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i like this poem alot hun it has a lot of meaning
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Honey I don't know, I have heard that there are many reasons different for everyone I have only been in a few relationships
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