There's a girl in the corner of the room,
Looking down at her notebook, just staring.
I think I'll call her Mystery, because
That is exactly what she is to me.
She doesn't look like anything special,
But there's something intriguing about her,
Something about her that catches my eye.
Mystery has an air of innocence,
Something that seems quite uncommon these days.
She has her notebook open; she's ready
To absorb all the knowledge from the class.
Some would call her a nerd, but I call her
My Mystery; everyone's Mystery.
Author notes
I don't know. I was trying something different.
Please tell me what you think
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Well it worked this is different. Observation is the key to good writing, and seeing that something special in ordinary moments. As you've clearly shown here, not all mysteries are actually negative, some are just simply unknown.
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Wonderful wite
This was nicely written,
it has a freshness to it and stood out.
Thank you for sharing this.
Love Peace
campanaro
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I <3 it.
And I <3 you.
And I hope you find scooby and the gang so they can help you figure out this mystery girl.
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dude i like this a lot.
your poems are always so down to earth and REAL. like, they are things that everyone can relate to in a way.
i love you and miss you.
<3
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I really enjoyed this actually. I was very well written, and I liked the flow.
"I think I'll call her Mystery, because
That is exactly what she is to me."
I really loved those lines.
Great write, and very thought provocing. The title was awesome.
.xo
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