Our eyes embrace
as we share a rhythm
of desire.
Our blood pulses in a
cadence that speaks
of pleasure and passion.
We move to music
that only we hear…
.. in a dance that flows
only in a glance.
Author notes
Option 1. 
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://redsigns.deviantart.com/art/Lady-Poison-101895257
40 words (exactly 
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended February 3, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Oooh, I like this one here. The image is great too for this one. Such good chosing of words, and in so few!
Congrats in the shiny
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beautiful poem that you've written. I could sit here & read again & again.. it has a serene feeling to it.
good luck
kat
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this was really beautiful.. something worth reading again.. thanks much for sharing!!! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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I figured as much... good work with the prompt!
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Beautiful work here! I love the message
in this my friend. All the best to you with
it in this contest. It's great to read you again!
Jeremy0826
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