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The Middle of The World

I'm standing
here
in the middle of the world
waiting
for you
for love
I've grown
and learned so much
and so it seems
my days grow longer
and nights grow shorter
my dreams scattered;
so I'm waiting
standing
right here
until we're together
standing in the middle of the world
forever........

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