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this devil town

and my lips are cold
speech becomes frozen

"you were nothing like you were supposed to be"

drowning in a reality
far too bitter
to ever be your own


"come on sugar"
give it up.
the lies and the nicotine compromises
you so often put yourself through

nails bitten to blood
teeth glued to your cheek
little ms. liar
please.

"because you were never good enough for anything"
other than
less than satisfactory.


you aren't the 'go to' kind.
with your too tight jeans
blackened eyes
and alcoholic breath.


"remember those nights.  when we used to feel alive?"



[too bad we were already dead]

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  • shortyjo
    February 26

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    Wow, this is kind of haunting..well written and I like the title, it suits it


  • Miss Faith
    February 3
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    ohhh