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what a mom (you'r trash)

I though you were our mom,
but mom's don't treat their kid's they way you treat your's.
you put us down,
call us ugly names,
tell us we are fat and ugly,
telling us how big of hoe's we are,
but mom let's check this out.
you'r fat and ugly
hair all over you'r face
no teeth
married and sleeping with other guys
never shave you'r leg's
bitching over dumb shit,
and far from being the best mom
so before you talk about your daughters
you better think again
because we know we are not perfect
we are far from it
but we don't have hair all over our face,
we have all our teeth,
we shave our legs,
we don't sleep with everybody,
and we are not fat, we are just right.
so look int he mirror before you open your big mouth.
and we can't stand you,
you make us sick, so get over yourself. your far from pretty yourself.
and to us your nothing but TRASH...


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this is something my sister and i wrote about our mom... once yall read maybe yall will understand how my sister and i feel and what we go through... thanks for reading
Written February 19th, 2004

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  • nomorework
    February 3, 2006
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    There are quite a few spelling errors and such, but this is the least of my worries.

    If this is personal, I will give my condolences. But beauty is only on the inside. I do believe, from the poem, that your Mam's heart is cold as stone, which would make her ugly. But, examine your heart as well. Mark 7:1 says 'Do not judge others, or you too will be judged.' so keep that in mind.

    Yours,
    Bailey

  • SilentlyCrying
    September 16, 2004
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    aw im sorry you have a mom like that.. good write tho

  • swirl-z
    February 19, 2004
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    great

    WOW!! this is an awesome poem i love it.. and i just want to tell you and your sister that i feel sorry for yo uguys... i wrote a poem with the same feelings you guys have but mine didnt turn out as good as your guys'... i hope theres something that can happen so you dont have to live through that.. Feel better


  • AnnD Moderators member
    February 19, 2004
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    oooh ouch!!... that was pretty hard htting.

    There is never any excuse for any parent to 'put their own child down'.. that is a dreadful situation.
    I'm a mum myself... and would despise to be a mum like that......and I hope i never will be.

    I certainly hope things improve for you and your sister.

    Ann