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She Sings (In Silence)



She sings of weeds
and childhood needs,
threading hopes
to a spilling grief
and her voice
is far too small for
us to hear.

In a brief moment
if the bustle stopped,
breaking thought
and we could hear,
I can be sure
she would sound
like heaven.

The world would cling
hoping for a smile,
easing guilt
upon her lips,
to release a kiss
and a well-earned sigh,
dropping her burden.


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  • Lady Michaella
    February 3

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    wow.. awesome work here. a really unique and special tkae on the prompt. a great job here, i loved this.

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 2

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    A wonderful write here! You did so well with the prompt given Good luck in the contest hon