Woman!
Flesh of my flesh
Bone of my bones
I gave you birth,
So that you can give me life
Time and time again
Upon your kiss, I breathe
Life in me
Upon your gaze I see the vastness,
Of Eternity
As the Circle spins, within the tides of
Your love
I am a lover
Within your tender arms
A child
Within your sorrows
The one to kiss away your tears
Oh, thou Lady
Maiden, Mother , Crone
Within your loving arms
I am whole.
Author notes
Contest, love Spiritual
A contest entry
- within your arms, I feel by Remnant.
430 points, ended February 18, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A Muse ...meant for us all.
I am in awe of your gift. -
Wow!!! My dear friend, I see you have written an exquisite, romantic poem. Man, this is beautiful. I wish I could have someone, to write me beautiful poems like this. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a great day.
Sandi -
Jalalbad inspired
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intelligantly done
I loved this piece it was very soothng,smart and tastefuly done thank you for sharing
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this poem is very beautifull so very deep and touching.
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Very beautiful. I loved the flow of this and the emotions of tenderness.
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Wow! I can see why this won. Awesome read. Stunning piece!
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This is very lovely. Your spirituality shines through in your fine work! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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This sounds spiritual indeed, almost as if to conjure them up from the other side. Now you've got me all spooked. Great poem though, I can just imagine this being spoken in a movie with the whole dark mysterious scene set. (I know I'm probably way off track here, but that is my first impression)...alby
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Within your arms, I feel whole
Well done -
so you eloquently write from the heart words of love and words of ancient wisdom
finely penned my brother
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For she guides my pen, and motivates my heart, my brother
merry we meet again
Blessed be in her love
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My God! This is wonderful!
"As the Circle spins, within the tides of
Your love"
Here is the River and the Circle and the essence of all life-Love from cradle to grave. I love that you included the descriptor 'crone' in this write...it is, for me, a wonderfully rich image of wisdom... You should win gold...no, platinum for this one, my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Peace always, Rhonda
I do wonder what inspired this one ...or rather whom?...
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There's a unique invoking creation, though old as time that beholds such a conviction of the place where a woman came. I am glad and comforted to feel the eternal unity through every word til last arrival of wholeness...splendid write
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Gorgeous, Gentle Beauty
This is exquisite, darling Brother! I love the way you wove scripture into the relationship in such an incredibly loving way: as it should be.
This is a winner; and, I feel that every wife out there is this moment envious, wishing their husbands would think and write to and of them in this glorious way. GOLD!
Luv & hugs, SisBon
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