I hate this life that I live
I could care less if I survive,
I've tried everything
even down to cutting,
Nothing seems to work
My stress can't be relieved
no matter who believes,
Just save my life and left me go
send me to the promise land
where no one can hurt me anymore,
Doctor you can't save me now
pronounce me dead
save us all,
I take up space that should be for someone else
no one wants me here
so let me shed my one last tear,
I hate this life that I live
I strive for just one more tear
What do you think
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well obviously very sad but i think it's a nice, well written poem that flows pleasantly. as far as the writing itself it's lovely.
in terms of the subject, all i can say is please don't give up just yet.
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