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bird/caught/fence



bird caught fence
wings bleeding
a bloody mess!

snagged in the wire

there is no use moving
moving only makes it
horrific & death faster,

go slowly,
go slow.

your black eyes beady
glazed in a lock with
the devil himself.

certainly I am just
as snagged.

to a man not a fence,
but the fatality
is just as swift.

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