Straight combined with curves
Black combined with white
One combined with two
To make a picture whole
Bright splashed with dark
Lines crossed with circles
Smooth turns to rough
To make a picture whole
Rich lives with poor
Dead stays with living
Sweet resides with sour
To make a picture whole
Love fights against hate
Peace struggles amid war
Sorrow in sync with joy
To make a picture whole
Thoughts traversed with words
Hopes combined with dreams
The world becomes a puzzle
This is where I'm from
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Author notes
I offer to be your little sister and my name is Broken Vow
this was an assignment for english. i took a twist on what she wanted: a "Where I'm From" poem. so yeah... i also believe that the world is a puzzle and we all have a place in that puzzle.
A contest entry
- AP Family by MysticBlue.
625 points, ended April 3, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is lovely. I want you for a lil sis.
Hugs, Marie
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Excellent work, I do like the visions your words painted. I agree, we all have a place here somewhere
Very well penned 
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such praise from one i admire most. thank you!
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well penned
a great poem -
I love it, especially how you repeated the line "to make a picture whole." And especially how you used oxymorons [I guess that's the proper term?] all throughout the poem. Amazingness.
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i agree with your Author Notes;; i loved this and the imagery and similes you use my dear beauty
great work love
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