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Broken Hearts and Shattered Dreams

Her hearts completely broken
She's had all she can take
Everything around her seems so distant
As if her reality will slowly fade
It's like waking from a nightmare
Only she lies awake through all the pain
She stares at the broken pieces
Hoping she can live through another day
In her world the sun no longer shines above her
And her blue skies have turned to gray
Her heart has shattered and fallen around her
She's gotten in too deep
Her life now consists of nothing but broken hearts
and shattered dreams

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  • its good and thanks

    thanks for likeing my other poem,and this one has alot of expression, and relates to a time where i believed there was nothing good that could come of life, i could say thanks just for writing it and im glad you liked my poem