when all is grey
all is lost
the tears must fall
for the days are fog
the skin does roll
off the bone
nothing is gained
if nothing is grieved
it is a bitter world
when we lose the one
we thought was our mate
but I know somehow
the sun will come
and wake me again
to a day that will be bright again.
can you relate?
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Wow... great job. it is sad, but in the end it turns for the better. Yay to you, that means great job!
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thanks for stopping in on a sad read which I selom write, but today I will again.
I will return the favor
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I like this..
I havn't seen my best friend in quite a while..
He's quite ill..
Very well done..
X x x
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It is a nice poem and I do understand. I lost my brother, he was my best friend.
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Look to the sun
Is that a loss or's it a gain?
Perhaps Ladybug can entrain
New experiences for you
Tam-ra can put on a new shoe
Rather than the one that was worn
That old one did make your heart torn?
Or maybe it's welcome relief
And this is no time to have grief
But see the sun peeks o'r the ridge
Don't let your heart become a fridge. -
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although a fickle mess, it truly is a relief for all I lost in the struggle and what I thought was so pure was me being used and nothing else. Thank you for seeing through to the real colors of this.
all is much better now
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