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when i think of her (valentine deadline)

When i think of you,
My heart aches.
When i think of you,
the earth quakes

When i think of you,
I think I'm falling in love.
Falling like a dove.
A dove that has been struck,
Struck by luck.
luck to meet a wonderful,
a beautiful,
a person like you.

Author notes

plz comment and feel free to recommend any edits i plan on giving her this on valentines day

plz comment and feel free to recomend any edits i plan on giving her this on valentines day

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  • Content
    February 2
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    pie!!!!!!!


  • Valle
    February 2
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    great

    awww that's a nice write,I wonder who it's about