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The Eagle

The Eagle

The eagle will soon strike
Which will suffer more this day-
The hunter, or prey?

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Nightfall

Graceful, elegant,
I rest lightly on a branch-
at the end of day

Author notes

The eagle looked sad to me, source of the first. The second inspired by the grace. Hope you enjoy

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  • Swan song gold member
    February 15
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    I liked the second one the most it came much closer to the haiku moment thank you for sharing