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Sleazy Cheese


Sam was walking down the street,
Laura saw him coming,
Everything beneath his feet,
Altered, started drumming
"Zero is your chance with me,
You are nothing, sonny
Click? We never will agree
Hop it now, my honey!"
"Easy now," said smiling Sam
Eagerly dismissed her:
"Sidle off and eat some ham,
Early, with your sister."

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  • ohhhh myyy gosshhh that is too funny!!!!! i loved it it was hilariouss!!!!! thank you so much for entering, and especially for doing that option... i was hopin someone would
    and you did a fantabulous job with it, i must say
    teehee hee!
    huggggglezzzz,
    -adria <3