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Hopelessly in love

When the sunshine’s on my face the first thing I would like to see is your face.
Smiling curves like those rays I would like to see them riding your angelic grace.
I won’t mind not waking up a morning just to see you are not next to me;
I be there just in my dreams if it’s there you want to be.
But please be there when I open my eyes staring at me
because I love you so dearly that I can’t express it this clearly.

I love your lovely eyes that spread love in me
Staring right through the ocean of my soul
and store those jewel of it which was lost.
Clean the weeds out of its shore.
And gaze right through my darkness
glittering like those stars in the night for sailors to come home.
And be the sun of my day that clears my way from sorrow .
A window of yourself but to me a door to fascinations
They say more than your words .

I love your luscious lips
As they touch me to fantasies unknown.
Sensual seductive and temptress they are,
As when they curve
they say
how much
I am in love with you.

I love your smile as when you do
I find more reasons to live this life.
Those curves strengthen me up
and brings me closer tothose silly moments of my life.
For you to keep them forever is a bliss I would try to live in
Doesn’t matter how goofy I have to be for them.

I love the way you smell.
Ever so lovely that fragrance you are
Like a dream of its own fantasy.
So beautiful that it’s a mystery
Intriguing my curiosity.

I love your hands as they hold me’
Soft and tender.
Strong and slender.
As they move around me
I tend to believe I live a fantasy.


I love you..
Just short sweet and true words from my heart
your are to me my strength my hope my reason to live
distances are not boundaries in my love as there are none.
I would be there where ever you are.
For once I believe in true love
As I have not tasted any addiction as yours.
I don’t feel happy if it’s not shared by you.
Nor sorrow any greater if it’s not consoled by you.
For you’re the courage in me to face this world.

your beauty is free as the air I breathe
unreasonable to any view..
just hold me when I wake up as forever I might end up in a dream of you.

To my love wheresoever you are
I dedicate my soul to you
I was not born as a lover but I shall die as one
With your love I lived many lifetime a life could offer
And would continue to live with for all the more left with you..

I am just in so in love with you.



Author notes

valentines coming up and love is in the air. just in the mood of the season of love..welcoming February in the moods of... love. its written in moments blur. would appreciate any criticism

i hope you enjoyed reading as much i enjoyed writing it.

abuyi
http://allpoetry.com/abuyi

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  • Amera gold member
    March 27

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    This is a beautiful prose and reads like a love letter. I'm a sucker for love poems... nice work!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Ellis gold member
    February 12
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    Excellent writing

    The one you love will be very fortunate to have your love!


    • abuyi
      February 12
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      thanks.. i find this write very cheesy to be frank


  • mysterious.angel
    February 9
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    this is good i hope she love you as much as you seem to love her

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