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Animal Crackers


Away
              I
                        go...

                              Leaving my herd...


Carried by the hand of god,
Ushered into taking a dip in the cup of life.

Icy cold
White as snow
The waters in the cup  r  i  p p  l  e
Gently as my hooves touch the surface.

I feel important,
My head growing bigger
As it soaks up knowledge.

But I now realize...
That like those little snacks that smile back
(Until you bite their heads off),
And that round, black and white, family
Whose children are all named "oreo",
I am merely sustenance
For a bigger world...


                                            Please don't eat me...

Author notes

It's all metophrical and stuffs for being about a snack. Lolz
I always felt sorry for them tho, cuz they look like weird little animals. XD

Option 4: Prompt=Animal crackers
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  • yayayyyyyzzz nice job!!!!! i loved this!
    "Icy cold
    White as snow
    The waters in the cup r i p p l e
    Gently as my hooves touch the surface"
    wonderful work!!!! i loved it =)
    huggggggggggggggggggggleeezzzz
    Adria!!!!!!!!

  • yayyz thanks ya for entering! your prompt is
    animal crackers
    havvve funn!
    good luck <3