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What I find in you




can you read my mind
can you see my heart
where my love for you
is held so true-

did you know
you are the white rose
that grows in my heart-

you are the colours
of the rainbow
that light up my world-

you are the hugs
that i feel
in the breeze
when we are apart-

and the kiss
in the rain
that finds it's
way to me
each day-

i could go on
till the end of time-

but i'll end this here
with this simple thought-

you are just what
my heart needs.







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can you read my mind Timothy Johnson

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 3, 2009
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    Wow, lovely beautiful write. Loved it.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 2, 2009
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    so sweet

    so beautifully romantic..a very solid piece my friend..


  • Desire gold member
    February 2, 2009

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    Wow~

    Now this is one Powerful piece penned and Love the words weaved~ Beautiful emotions evoked also energy that radiates This also swells the eyes~
    with Passion Bravo!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~