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A Frightful Bat

My eyes are a fightful bat
Skittering around the room
in a fearful flight

Further they soared
seeking that which
couldn't be found

Retreating behind their lids
they returned, having
not captured the gaze
of the morsel they saught

Vanquished my sight lurks
whtin the cave they
spawned, horrified by that stare

Author notes

Wrote this with just two words during "Frightful bat" during my creative writing class

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