autumn chill
an eagle scrutinizes
a fleeting shadow
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hunter’s moon
a field mouse scurries
to safety
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU ME by Swan song.
700 points, ended February 15, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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As I understand it even the glint in mousey's eye would betray him!
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congratulations, sensei! good haiku - much to learn from here.
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Stunning excellent imagery and thought two superb haikus
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Hi, I deeply apologize for not getting back to you on this Gold winner. I appreciate your choice very much... and your kind comment. My son-in-law was shot and murdered on Feb 14th and the funeral was just a week ago. I haven't been on much and I don't recall even knowing I won this contest.
Thanks again for your choice of me and your very kind comment. I really do appreciate it............... take care always,
peace in haiku,
Don
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Awesome. Not just another haiku describing the picture, you actually let yourself be inspired by it. . . yay! The second one is my favorite. . "hunters moon" conjures up many images and impressions. Outstanding work!
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va
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A pair of finely-fashioned haiku and a pleasure to read.
Good work,
Bill
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Ah, you brought such a vivid sight with both haiku.
The second is my favourite though
You always leave me amazed when I read your work
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i like these...immensely visual...PK
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Thanks a bunch!!!
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Love the imagery it invoked. I felt like the mouse!
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LOL.... thanks!
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Two very beautiful, well-written haiku. Very full of imagery. Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks a bunch. Much appreciated.
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Fine sir, your haiku are inspired and lovely.
Images to bring the scene to life, most certainly. 
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Thanks so much....
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