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Sentinel/ Proud


Sentinel

Sentinel watches
constant vigil eyes alert
stately eagle stare


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Proud


Azure skies highlight
feathered warrior, ever proud
sentry of nature

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  • Swan song gold member
    February 15
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    Nice take on theeyes of theeagle here
    well done and thank you for entering


  • nOva-
    February 7

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    LOVE what youve done with the picture prompt. these are wonderful haikus! Great job! Good luck in the contest

    ~nva


  • arafura gold member
    February 2
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    I like this! Great work, poet!