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Better

Do you feel better now that you slept with my friend?
Is this how you really wanted our relationship to end?
I didn't think you were that kind of guy.
To go behind my back and lie.
When you told me.
I wanted her to die.
I couldn't do much besides cry.
I still ask myself why.
I was pregnant with your baby at the time.
Was it really worth it?
To go behind my back and cheat?
Were you like a cat in heat?
What did I do to deserve this?
I gave you everything I had.
Step up and act like a real teen dad.

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  • ViceVersa
    February 2

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    Touching

    Wauw, an amazing story with a lot of pain in it!
    Very good writing.It really touched me.It makes me sad that there are people with no responsibility at all.Keep up the writing!!