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When love begins to vanish

When love begins to vanish
  And the fire has lost it's glow

The mind says please end it
    The heart say's take it slow

Memories of the good times
    Seem to play in your head

As soft tears are falling now
    In the darkness of your bed

You reach out for to  touch
    Perhaps to restart the flame

Only find an empty place
    Where echos still remain



 
   

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  • karma-n-peace
    February 4

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    You reach out for to touch
    Perhaps to restart the flame

    Only find an empty place
    Where echos still remain

    Oh my gosh!
    You never cease to touch my heart.


  • Sandygram
    February 3
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    So True My Friend

    John your words always seem to be what I feel in my own heart. Reaching out and finding nothing is very said and makes the nights seem endless at times. Your words atre always so lovely and heartfelt. Take care. Hugs and Smiles.

    Blessings with love,
    Sandy