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Tears

Missing image




Not being able to turn







Back the hands of time







I still cry the tears of







~ Yesterday ~


















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The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture found on google images.

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  • Poetrist
    July 27, 2009
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    I'm lovin' your pen!


  • SteveS gold member
    May 29, 2009
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    Sometimes, simplicity can be grand. This is one of those sometimes.


  • Beret55 silver member
    May 26, 2009
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    Your very good at this. I liked it.


  • mcope8050
    May 9, 2009
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    POWERFULL!!!!

    nice write and the photo is amazing also,,, thanks


  • afroqban
    February 13, 2009

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    awww...yeah i have been there before. nice capture in few words, well done


  • Sadpuppet
    February 13, 2009
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    aww, i can feel your pain in this...really beautiful. i love it!


  • cre8tiv-writer
    February 8, 2009

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    Brief and grippingly powerful!!!! You are an artist with the finest of penz luv!!! Much respect!!!


  • moluv10
    February 2, 2009
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    powerful words here. they enhance the picture so well. Excellent!!


  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    February 2, 2009
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    Stunning! Another powerful write, what can I say you're good.


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    February 2, 2009
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    so lovely said in so few but so eloquent words


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 2, 2009

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    Such a gorgeous story you told here.
    You really brought this picture to life.
    Beautiful yet, filled with sadness and heartache.
    Well done my friend and keep it up!
    Always a pleasure to read you sweetie!




    Jeremy0826

  • liltxgirl
    February 2, 2009
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    That was beautiful and that describes alot in my life at this moment. very well done.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 2, 2009
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    WOW!!

    Stunningly powerful!! excellent work based on the prompt..bravo my friend!


  • Desire gold member
    February 2, 2009

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    Oh My Word~

    This speaks volumes and emotions You have brought through especially in image also in words~
    also touches deep and resonates~
    each day I cry but tears of Happiness also Sadness with words I wanted to say on tip of my tongue- hanging there ready for release so I have no excuses of why not~
    Excellent this is Beautiful
    So Love that image too~ flower is one of my favorites
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Candy6
    February 2, 2009
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    creative

    sad. because I'm hurting now.

  • StarLover
    February 2, 2009
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    I LOVE IT!!! FANTASTIC!!! Oh these few words say SoOoOo much...xoxo Miranda


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    February 2, 2009

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    nice honey you are starting to do well with your short prompts i enjoy this side of you very well thanks for haring


  • NaturallyIMPERFECT
    February 2, 2009
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    it says alot..it sounds like alot is going on thatt you want to erase or change.

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