Sentiments mirrored her ambience
of loves bitter sweetness
heart languishing as it
hemorrhages at the same time
Patiently waiting in the vestibule
for his anguish to subside
While she stands on the other side
of the looking glass with her hand out
Waiting for him to embrace her love
stepping over the last stumbling block
into the milieu of merriment
Together
Author notes
I do not claim this picture used with this write to be my own. Picture found on
http://www.formerfatguyblog.com/2007/09/19/trust-and-love-whats-the-difference.html
A contest entry
- prewrite contest first come first sure by serenity silvermoon.
566 points, ended February 27, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LoveNeverDies by LoveNeverDies..
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you have emotions? by Forgotten Anomaly.
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FLAWLESS BEAUTY,,,,
I can say little more. -
This is such a beautaful poem, a releif in ways after much searching, shifting, and glazed over reading. You have talent, that is one thing for sure. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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This was such an indolging piece,
Your very talented..
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"Patiently waiting in the vestibule
for his anguish to subside
While she stands on the other side
of the looking glass with her hand out"
Such depth of love...
Thankyou for entering in LoveNeverDies,
Goodluck
(:
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Awesome!
I am left flaccid, exhausted. A voyeur fulfilled.
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I love how you can switch up the way that you do, that takes real talent. I have become a big fan of yours...Scribe on!!
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wow, this is so great! i love it!
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Wow....such crisp and unaltered beauty!!! Forlorn waiting for a seemingly unappearing love....great job H!!!
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Beautiful! your words go so well with the picture. excellent job hon!
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Your words draw me in as his love draws her. I really enjoyed this piece. Very magical!
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Aaaaaaw Dangggggg~
You know how to bring tears to the eyes Beautiful and this so tugs at the Heartstrings
there was another picture similar to this- I have to find for You for I imagine You could pen a Masterpiece with it -but there is an actual hand sticking out
Love the lines:
Sentiments mirrored her ambience
of loves bitter sweetness
heart languishing as it
hemorrhages at the same time
Powerful images- Okies me done babbling
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
Wow, a great creation. So truly well worded. Thank you for sharing.
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outstanding
another excellent piece from you my friend, perfectly suited for the prompt..lots of luck in the ccontest, though this looks like a 'shiny' winner!!
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