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Act Of Love

Let not that what we feel within our hearts be ignored,
as I cherish the tenderness of your kiss
and feel the longing for my heart to be revealed.
Fingers touching the softness for your flesh,
feeling you shiver under my touch
as we embrace all that our hearts desire.

Bearing our souls to one another
this passion longing to now be set free
as the affections between us grows steadily.
World outside this room no longer exists,
only that which our love does create.
Naked flesh pressed against each other,
rejoicing within the sensations they do bring.

Thrusting within you,
throbbing to the point of ecstasy's release
as we push our passion further and further
till there is no turning back.
Oh my darling, we are now eclipsed
within the flames of our own desire,
two souls becoming as one
a unity that for so long have we waited to share.

Lips locked within a passionate embrace,
limbs entwined as we are enraptured within this moment.
The pleasure of our flesh overwhelms us,
hearts pounding wildly
as we are one, joined within love's unity.
A moment together that shall be cherished forever,
a love now stronger
as I explode in such rapture within you
the delight of the flesh which we share together
to express our love.

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  • azlyn gold member
    February 2

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    So lovely...filled with passionate desire. Tender words of enticing need. Thank you for the entry and Happy Valentines Day!!!