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between Aphrodite and Ares...

Aphrodite to Ares :

- why Ares?
God of war ,
there is wars and battlefeild
into trees and flowers' yeild
to drench with blood the land
violate and offend ,
the beauty of life

why Ares?
you let the widow cry
you let the innocent die
wars cause distress
a pain that won't regress

why Ares?
you hasten men's fate
increase death's rate
leave starvation
to the alive generation

why Ares?
but you are not to blame
of all this filth, all this shame
of selfish greeds
of criminals needs

called needs of a man...


Ares to Aphrodite :

- O Godness of beauty and of love
your name is a sweet melody so dove
may i bow and kiss your hand
i did not mean to offend

but as you see, your honor
men strive to war's horror
men are blinded by power
making themselves lower

men's goal is to distroy
to own slaves like wodden toy
the best of his relations is ownership
to win the throne and worship ,

the extend of the stolen lands
proud of what their hands
have made , have killed
for what they have willed

O Godness of beauty and of love ,
my darling devine beauty all above
of what the eye could describe
how i wish men would subscribe ,

all the hate to love
to own the real tresors
the one with no meseares
the real fortune in  love....

but men are blinded ,
like you said
values are dead
by selfish greeds
and criminal needs
called needs of a man......



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  • hamid
    May 11, 2009
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    You are quite inspire from Greek Mythology. Any reason?


  • lake of dremas
    February 5, 2009
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    it is just the Greek metology , nothing to do with what i beleive , this is why it is called methology!!! read methology , you'll understand , thanks for commenting


  • BellaAmare
    February 4, 2009
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    Do you believe in many God's? I'm asking because you said: God of war.


    • lake of dremas
      February 26, 2009
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      i see you have elready done , well thanks , the anwser is NO.. it is simply methology..greek methology.. i used the image to make a dialogue between tow Gods : war and LOVE .. just to have a strong convincing image of how war is awful , and to show how men is low