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Illusory

Damn you, ludic lover
Enticing my wanton desire with your
Lustful gaze,
Your toxic kiss,
Your tender touch,
As your passion engulfs me
I’m intoxicated by your lust
Like an addict I get sick
How could this be?
My poison and yet my only remedy
How silly of me
To let you get the better of me
Your love was only illusion
For in the end I’m left with a delusion

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  • Kari gold member
    February 4

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    Wow, this one is dark, but at the same time it enticed me with the words in this piece. It's so sad when love winds up being an illusion.
    Kari


  • Nardiarrrg
    February 4
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    waw

    This poem is so short but it does get to a pretty good point...
    well written