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make me complete

stuck up in my room with you
we will talk of the don'ts and does
lounging on my bed with you
our minds from the coops have flew

talking about the board walks
and dreaming about diving off the docks
keeping each other awake with our talks
about ever one els and punk rock

your a tattoo covered angle
and our pain we need to strangle
so our bodies can start to tangle


we could leave this city on our feet
all we got to do is follow this street
now lets throw the habits away we can't beat
without each other we are incomplete

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i'm happy with him.

it is a good place don't you think?

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  • L.Jay
    February 2
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    this was awesome. and all so very cute! i'm glad he makes you happy.