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Stone Steps

Remember the sleepless night we shared
We sat on the stone steps
Our backs to the world
As tears escaped my eyes
You brushed a hand across my back
Placing your head on my shoulder
Hair brushing across my cheek
Worries were present
But they danced with ecstasy
We were under the stars
But over the moon
The place I have always wanted 
But we have to face the world again
Rise from the stone steps
And depart to fall asleep
But in my dreams this will last
The reality may fade
But the memory is stagnant

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