eats my flesh
eats my
insanity
one moment
and all
is
right.
Author notes
about a subject that is quite obvious if you think about it.
A contest entry
- Mm'kay. It's Free-verse Time :] by Sunkissed xo.
400 points, ended February 19, 2009, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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wow.. this is a fantastic work!! GREAT job here
this poem hsa great metaphor in it.. i love that
thanks for entering! and best of luck in the contest!!
Your Co-Judge,
-Lemon Bee-
xx
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