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I still haven't found what I'm looking for

Lovers' sighs give voice
to sleepless nights,
where I wish but that
I had reason to
lose sleep over.

The dreams that flood
my nights with passion,
with a dance of bleeding
colors remain but a faint
memory of an elusive beauty.

I lie abed, eyes scrunched
to ward off those morning rays
that dispel my nightly visitors.
But it is in vain, for arms oustretched
ever I wake, nothing in my grasp.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    May 27

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    Aw, I hope you find your love dear, and your words are beautiful.


  • oceanbluize
    February 6
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    You aremmost welcome


  • oceanbluize
    February 6

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    Aww, I now feel you pain, and have for many, many months now. To not have that feeling in your life, makes it seem like you are missing half of it. In my opinion, I envy those, who do not know what it truly feels like to yearn for those nights. For truly, ignorance is bliss. Fear not, for one day your dream will become reality.

    Ocean.

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 3
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    Awww sad longing in this one, so creatively and wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing!

    • Overcast
      February 3
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      Thanks! No, really. It's wonderful how you always take the time to comment

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