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Complexities

Complexities in moral view,
Give me credit where it's due,
I do not lead nor I confuse,
Please do not ask, I may refuse,
It's hard you see, to tell you this,
These feelings they have gone amiss,
I feel for you not what I should,
My actions, they're misunderstood,
I love another, you know this,
our friendship I would sorely miss,
I hate myself, for you don't see,
I am not who you want me to be.

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Written February 19th, 2004

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  • FrozenDaffodil
    March 24, 2004
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    :)

    Beautifully written! I love your style. Never too long and boring, always short and meaningful. Keep up the good work!

    ~Moonshine

  • Ryle Hira
    February 28, 2004
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    Wonderful

    As always you wow us again. This poem really should be deticated to my best friend ken. We've been friends for so long and that's how i'll always see him. On the other hand he's starting to fall in move with me, if he isn't completely there already. I don't know what to do about because I would sorely miss him as a friend if this all blows up in our faces. Only time will tell. Thank for the great write. BTW you are a POET!!!!


  • MissPumpkinKing
    February 19, 2004
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    this is a fantastic poem i can relate to it soooo well i lvoe the alst lines because it makes so much sence for the reality i really do like it keep it up