We all were born and given life
And when it's time, we die.
There is only the dance
Of life in between to help
Make the world pass by
A contest entry
- The Dance by dewfall.
950 points, ended March 8, 2009, 25 entries
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I like the message of this one. Short and sweet. Best of luck in the contest with it, it should do quite well.
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Many thanks once again. I like this one myself. It ame about after discussion with a friend about a cricket match. We both thought the players owuld be better as dancers.
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i must agree, good write...
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Life is a dance, so enjoy it, and dance. I appreciate your taking time to comment, and thank you for that.
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Nice
I really like this, warm and uplifting piece of poetry.
Life is a dance!
Lilly
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Look at life as a dance, and enjoy it. Not always easy to do. Appreciate your commenting, thank you.
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Sweet thoughts. And in the dance of life, may our toes be rarely trodden on!
alby
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Heartfelt appreciation for your comments, Alby, and I must second your motion. My toes are such delicate extremeties.
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Lol...you crack me up Bob.
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forgive me dear poet but my feet carry me around some strange places and i treasure them and their "delicate extremeties"
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Honestly I'm with you...I feel the same about my feet. lol
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Very deep my friend. One of your most profound writes. Good luck in the contest!
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A great many thanks John. It seems my poetry has had a "gear change". I don't know why.
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