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How Much I Miss You

Damn I miss you very much,
Right now your hand I wish I could clutch.
Oh baby I miss you more then you can tell,
So hard for you i really fell!

Miss you baby, that I do,
Cause you are my only boo.
I can only imagine the feel of your lips,
And when you walk, the way you shake your hips.

So badly i want to see your face,
When I do it makes my heart race.
Each second I miss you more, and more,
Any minute I wish you would walk through the door.

Your body so sexy, I miss alot,
Without it here, i'm going to rot.
You so great, come see me soon,
Without you here i'm going to turn into a loon!

I hope you know I love you so,
Again I hope you never go.
Am I seen the same way in your eyes,
I love our hellos, but hate the goodbyes.

Again I hope there never said,
I wish you were lying with me in my bed.
Baby that's all that I can say,
I love you so much more everyday!

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I wrote this poem about my boyfriend who i am madly in loove with we are twelve by the way!

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  • blueyez
    February 2
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    very sweet!

  • ScaryGothMother
    February 2

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    aww thats lovely, i know how it feels to hunger the touch of someone you love, especialy a partner, melted my heart that little bit more each second we were apart
    well done keep it up