I feel like we're flying
through uncharted galaxies.
No longer afraid of dying,
when you're lying
here with me.
We were like piano keys-
ringing out of harmony.
Could I have made you stay
with a simple melody?
I've been writing everyday,
while you're astray
in Miami.
Baby we're piano keys-
ringing out of harmony.
Author notes
Just finished recording this one. Message me if you would like to hear it.
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Comments
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Well I can hear in my head the music I would put to this.
Tunefully written.
Nice, I like it.
Thank you for entering this into my contest.
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i love it. its absolutely amazing and i want to give clappies but i do not have enough points maybe next time
good luck in the next round ^^
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Nicely done. I'd love to hear it sung to music! Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck! I'm honored to have you show your work here!
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Thank you for your entry good luck in the contest
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Stunning write.
Amazing imagery!
I don't usually give out applause, btw.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Lovely creative metaphors. Very endearing
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Oh my godd.. I love it.. One of the best lyrics i've ever read. This is great chorus. It's really quite amazing. It's something i probably will remember for quite awhile. Niceee nice job.
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