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Penning Fun

And the world seemed brighter
As my pen hit the page

I felt the world around me
Melt and twist
Like glowing metal and water

And timed seemed non-existent
And faded
With the pages of this journal

And how I loved it...

The way the words blended
Folded
Mended

Seemed so eloquent
And beautiful

And I wrote on
Methodically marking
Mannerisms mastered by
Myself


As the the light went out
And came back again

With it those bags under my eyes
"Oh no, not crows..."

And this popped in some
Inspiration

So I penned
And forgot

And how fun it was
When one journal turned to three

And three to five..

And how fun it is!
That I share it with thee...

Author notes

Drizzt Do Urdyn

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    February 1

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    nice write. there are some alliteration in your poem. well done. i wish you good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.