Fuck life
Fuck love
Fuck emotions...
All I'm feeling is pain--
a taste of love gone wrong.
Isolation is what I crave--
it's so tempting
to tell everyone to fuck off,
that I can handle myself,
that I don't need anyone to live...
I could just push them all away;
I'd be alone and lonely,
but I'd be safe with my knowledge
that Love could not hurt me again.
This shit is too hard to deal with
especially when my dreams have disolved
from the acidic touch of your words...
"You've ruined my life"--
these will forever run through my mind--
a testament to the cuts upon my wrists.
What can sate Love's cruel irony?
Perhaps I need just a little taste
of blissful euphoria--
drowing my sorrows
till I forget even my name...
Author notes
Yea ok..I don't feel this way anymore, but I thought I'd post it anyway..whatever..it kind of reflects my feelings now..only not the original content of what it was I was expressing (if that makes any sense at all..?) Umm..yea..
Written November 19th, 2003
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Just leaving a short comment to tell you I was right in reading through your work, you are a great poet and keep writing. This was well written, I liked it.
~Bethany~ -
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You give a very lucid picture as to what your trying to run from or beat the crap out of but non the less you still give a small picture of a vulnerability that haunts you. I really like the poem, despite the fact i am not a promoter of four lettered words. Yet a veiw to a better voc. can always steer away from such. Any how good write!
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Hehe..thank you for commenting on my poem. I love the feedback..heh.
~Ica~ -
As I'm sure many people will tell you, I can relate very well to this.. it happens, for different reasons, at different times... and you, my dear, have put it into words wonderfully. Very real. I enjoyed this greatly and look forward to read more from you (when I'm not on pain killers lol) But don't mistake that for dellusion of any sort, I meant everything I said
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Raw emotion at its best...my absolute favorite kind of poem. There is nothing like screaming fuck you at someone ... lol ... making them see everything they've done to you ... I really love the flow of this poem, and the ending lines are perfect. Glad you commented on mine (thank you) or I may not have found your work.
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This a well expressed poem.
I feel like saying something to help change the way you feel.
So i guess that is a compliment to the poem. -
Dispite the lack of comments, This is really good. Very emotional and sad. Great write. Keep it up. XOX
- Angel Tears
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I could relate to this. We all feel like this at some point in our lives. It is part of losing a loved one. Good write, well expressed. Well done.
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